He stood
there ,surprised.
Three months
and out of the hospital bed even the gentle breeze felt like a blessing.
Flashes of
past days crossed his mind reminding him of his daily routine when every day he
used to curse the morning fog that settled down on the car’s panes giving him
another reason to curse life and it’s maker.
Today ,standing
on the wet grass ,feeling it’s freshness between
his bare fingers and touching those tiny drops sparkling on the maple leaves he
could hear someone silently speak .
“It’s the magic of nature that anchors these moments……called Life”
This post is liked up with Friday Fictioneers Photo prompt , WOW "Magic" Five sentence fiction "Anchor"
Welcome back. Believe it or not I was about to email you last night! But then got caught up in studies. How you been? :)
ReplyDeletePs lovely take on all the prompts!
Actually have been quite busy with work and a new project . Couldn't find time for the blog . But was missing it like hell .
ReplyDeleteThis thing started in the middle of A-Z Challenge ...and don't ask how I managed posting for the challenge .
But still could complete that ...thanks for your support all the way :)
Aah yes towards the end it was just posting I remember :) and aah loved reading your posts. Good luck with the project :D
Deletewelcome back sushree :) i have been wondering from so many days why u hav stopped blogging and if evrythn was alright at ur end! glad to see u posting again :)
ReplyDeleteand the post is lovely :)
After A-Z Challenge and UBC I wanted to take a break for sometime . More ever I am out of my home town from the mid of April for work purpose ....so couldn't find more time . But thanks to all you guys...for showering your love on me and my blog that coerced me to get active again :)
DeleteBeautifully written Doc. I can feel the whole emotions to one's delight. Bautiful:)
ReplyDeleteOh...thank you Vishal ...for your kind words of appreciation :)
DeleteBeautiful! A wonderful take on both the prompts!
ReplyDeleteThank you Reema :) After a long time...how are you and hw r things goin ...
DeleteI am good.. and things are okay.. missed you on WB.. luckily managed to find you here. Even I am thinking of dropping out of WB.
DeleteWow :) What a wonderful take on the prompts :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much ....and welcome to my blog :)
DeleteHello and welcome ! Your story is beautifully done!
ReplyDeletePatricia ( high fives and raspberries )
Thanks a lot ....welcome to my blog :)
DeleteSo beautiful and a gorgeous take on the prompt for 5SF. x
ReplyDeleteThank you so much....
DeleteI like this. Great take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deletewhen i read different posts some of them help me to broaden my thinking horizon......yours is one
ReplyDeleteIs it :) Thanks a lot for your kind words of appreciation :)
DeleteA lovely post..and for 2 prompts :) well combined...enjoyed reading :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much ...glad you liked :) And it's 3 Prompts;)
ReplyDeleteTrue, life is fragile and we take it for granted. Coming out of a three month stint in a hospital is reason enough count your blessings.
ReplyDeleteIndeed it is.....
DeleteNeat! Really nice. Good work this week!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteDear Sushree,
ReplyDeleteThe concept of writing one story for five prompts is a bit daunting to me. Often it doesn't work, in my opinion. This worked fairly well.
shalom,
Rochelle
Sushree, Good story. There's just one thing that doesn't seem to me to fit well. He was standing on the wet grass feeling it between his bare "fingers" would sound better if it was his bare "toes" being he's standing. Other than that, well done. : ) ---Susan
ReplyDeleteSushree.. Lovely take. :):) - Magic of Nature !!
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