Quietly she
escaped , over the weekends .
To a place
unknown.
Far from the
maddening rush that seemed to shout “it’s weekend again” .
But she
wasn’t convinced.
For her
interests varied from those of her colleagues busy comparing the prices of the
latest brands.
If questioned
, she replied nothing except a faint
smile which read “you won’t understand” .
Leaning her
bicycle against the majestic wall she readied herself for the day .
Making
herself comfortable on the stairs that opened up doors for a complete new world
traversing till horizons inviting creative minds to weave tales , that speaks
enough though in silence .
Pic : Friday Fictioneers .
Dear Sushree,
ReplyDeleteIt would read better to say, "she readied herself..."
There's a lot to be said within the bounds of silence, isn't there?
shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks for the suggestion :) and yes it's there .....
DeleteWhat a lovely take on the prompt :) We all need those 'me' time, don't we.
ReplyDeleteI bow to u, Doc and such beautiful words weaved. I feel like chasing my dreams and quest for freedom:)
ReplyDeleteBrilliant !! A great take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteListening to the silences...not everyone can do it. But something tells me you are perhaps quite good at that sort of thing :)
ReplyDeleteThis was a very nice read, Sushree!
Ah that personal space, we all crave for! :)
ReplyDeleteHi sushree, happy to inform you that i have nominated you for the Liebster award :) might be 'again', but i hope it matters! congrats and best wishes!
ReplyDeletehttp://pencilstripes.blogspot.com/2014/06/the-first.html
Sushree, Good story. It's difficult these days to find silence. We have to work at it but it's worth it. We need those quiet times. Well written. :) ---Susan
ReplyDeleteSeems like she doesn't fit it - I hope she finds others of the same ilk.
ReplyDeletehello di the fact is that you can hear to the silence and can learn from it becoz it has various quantum of qualities and various angels of dimentions of it''s own... plz write more and more....
ReplyDeleteGood, that she found the 'Me' time and her solace. Sweet take on the prompt, Sushree !
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