Beautiful it
was
Every day
As she
swayed her curvy body away
A gentle
breeze seemed to cross
For love
struck couples
Wanting to
be lost
In valley of
emotion
In feeling’s
stream
Speaking of
love
Not caprice
or whim
Alas! I forgot
the world around
That crushed
my tender love to the ground
Ignoring requests
Snubbing my
pleas
Reminding
I am a mere tree
Born to
serve
With my log
With my wood
Giving warmth
preparing food
Whatever I
am
I don’t want
to know
Coz I will
be waiting for her
In flowery
springs
Or in winter
snow
Pic Credit : http://vidyasury.com
This post is linked to
100 Words on Saturday 2014 - # 17
100 Words on Saturday 2014 - # 17
Elegant is the word that came to my mind after reading this.... a poem in the words of a tree...good one Sushree
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Thank you :)
DeleteA wordsmith tree :) Nice one, Sushree!
ReplyDeleteActually you did something nice here :)
DeleteThoughts of a tree! You have brought a lovely twist here Sushree!
ReplyDeleteWonderful is all I can say on behalf of the tree :-). Very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteAesthetically chosen words touching the heart and nice woven to give definition and shape to the tree. Mesmerizing words. Doc:)
ReplyDeleteThank you for your beautiful words :)
DeleteIt takes a sensitive soul to hear the cry of a tree and whispers of the air. Beautifully done, Sushree!
ReplyDeleteI wish every human remembers that they too have a sensitive soul inside . The only thing they need is ....to hear it's voice ....
DeleteThe log of wood is dead but your poem is full of life and is flowing.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteA lovely poem.These lines were touching
ReplyDeleteI am a mere tree
Born to serve
With my log
With my wood
Giving warmth preparing food
Lovely poetry :)
ReplyDeleteWords of a tree :)
You have chosen just the right words Sushree. Lovely again :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. Simple words but such a deep poem. :)
ReplyDeleteKudos to you for choosing to speak out for the tree . I wish we could hear the tree's plea , always !
ReplyDeleteSpeaking on behalf of the tree!! A great poem wonderfully carved.
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem! :)
ReplyDeleteDelightful power expressing heart felt of emotion. You gave life and beauty to the tree.
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