# 1
Irritated. That’s exactly what he felt.
On every body. On every thing.
The property and it’s division. Oh! It has been such a
painful task. All his brothers, wanted the best.
The family orchard. How can they just rip it apart.
Water. It leaked. Constantly. From the tap. Near the
courtyard.
How he wished if somebody could fix both.
#2
Tiring. Was the whole day for him.
So were most of his days.
The blazing sun just makes it more difficult.
Water if somebody would offer. But who will, to a daily laborer.
Thank God! The tap. It leaked.
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Thats so well written :)
ReplyDeleteIt touched the heart and strong narrative that makes the emotion of a thirsty man come alive.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Vishal for your beautiful words :)
DeleteI really like this, Sushree. Well done!
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DeleteHats off to you .... same scenario in two different perspectives ... just WOW :-)
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DeleteI liked the dual perception of the same event in our different states of mind. Very well described and justified about each of the emotions!
ReplyDeleteI liked the dual perception of the same event in our different states of mind. Very well described and justified about each of the emotions!
ReplyDeleteI liked the dual perception of the same event in our different states of mind. Very well described and justified about each of the emotions!
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