The wheels moved, I couldn’t.
Something had stiffened my whole body, still I could hear
them speak, in a language unknown. Footsteps approached me, pacing up my heart
beat and making me sweat all over.
A thousand thoughts popped up in my mind imagining
every possible outcome for my body that was probably going to thrown out of the
train like an unwanted fetus denied any chance of survival.
The moving wheels seemed to invite the inevitable for me
when, mom she just switched on the light compelling me to start a new day again,
far from the world of dreams.
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The wheel of time is a great reminder of the extraordinary and upset, yet rekindle hope. Superb:)
ReplyDeleteYes it's indeed is a great reminder :) Thank you
DeleteChoice of words very powerful... Great FSF :)
ReplyDeleteReally ! Thank you for your kind words :)
DeleteHaha, didn't see that coming.. Good one :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :) Happy to know you enjoyed
DeleteThat's well written.. powerful in fact!
ReplyDeleteCheers
Thanks a lot Geets :)
DeleteGreat story.
ReplyDeleteWith wheels there always is a memory or dreams associated with it.
ReplyDeleteYup...you are right :)
DeleteThe threat from the dream thankfully been interrupted my Mom! Nicely described ☺
ReplyDeleteThe threat from the dream thankfully been interrupted my Mom! Nicely described ☺
ReplyDeleteThe threat from the dream thankfully been interrupted my Mom! Nicely described ☺
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