Few years ago
she had stepped out of her home with the
promise of returning back only when she cleared this exam
Coz she knew it was the sole way she would survive pangs of
her past that seem to stab her afresh everyday
Today , her
name featured in the list repaying her
back for every little pleasure she was starved off in the course of preparation
and transformed her into an administrative officer
instantly
Someone in the crowd asked
“ How does it feel “
She couldn’t
reply a single word but deep within she felt her heart begin to heal
Write Tribe's 100 Words on Saturday 2014 # 9
that's one determined girl :) beautiful story
ReplyDeleteThank you Rajlakshmi :)
DeleteLove her grit and determination. She truly proved that, 'I am more than my scars'!! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shilpa ...life indeed is more than our pain n scars :)
DeleteInspiring story :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Beloo :)
DeleteTriumph of human spirit and very inspiring, indeed:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Vishal n ya human spirit does triumph over every challenge :)
Deletenice!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteA girl with great determination!! Loved the story,doctor.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Ma'm :)
DeleteGetting what we wish for is only possible through hard work and determination....nice take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteRightly said Nabanita ....Thank you :)
DeleteA heartfelt story on grit and glory. Well woven :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteThat's a beautiful story :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Swathi :)
DeleteLove this story.. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you doc :)
DeleteOoh nice one again sushree :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sabeeha :)
DeleteOhh I love the girl's character! Very strong and determined to make her dreams her destiny. Love it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much doc :) Glad you liked it n welcome to my blog:)
DeleteOh Thank you so much for such a beautiful interpretation :)
ReplyDeleteI instilled the crowd in the story as every time we get touched by success it appears again but alone we have to walk on the path towards it . And ya God always keeps an eye on his beloved children ...
Awesome :) Her hardwork has healed her ! Admire your imagery :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sreeja :) it does heal us sometimes...
DeleteLOVED IT Dr.
ReplyDeleteThanks Arpit....glad you loved it :) And welcome to my blog :)
Deletei like reading such pieces, where the character is identified through moments and emotions...
ReplyDeleteInspiring :)
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