The name of
the best artist of the year was announced .
A satiated
smile adorned her lips not only displaying the happiness of a proud parent but
also that of an passionate artist torn apart from her canvass giving in to the
restrains of an Indian woman’s life .
“Mama”.... her daughter’s voice flowed in , there
she stood beaming with radiance on her gentle face .
In utter silence
she promised herself to let those tiny hands cling on to the paintbrush and
colors as if paired forever unlike her own which lay in ruins abandoned in some
corner of her old home .
This post is a Five Sentence Fiction with the Theme " Ruins" For BlogAdda's WOW with prompt "Paired Forever"
Nice story linking two prompts aptly, Sushree. Has the right element- happy ending with child's success!
ReplyDeleteThanks...mostly I love happy endings :)
Delete:D her daughter lives her dream :)
ReplyDeleteIf not she... let her daughter live her's...
Deletetrue that!
Deletevery clever combination of 2 prompts :) Aptly describes mother's love for her daughter :) great work :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much ....glad you liked it :)
DeleteBeautifully written; I loved this.
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nice story and well described :) keep writing :)
ReplyDeleteThank you...Sachin :)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this very much. I noticed a lot of responses this week on the FSF prompt!
ReplyDeleteGlad that you enjoyed it :)
ReplyDeleteWriting FSF is real fun dabbed with creativity :):)
This was my first time and I just loved writing it :)
Di You are so creative..:) Loved it..:)
ReplyDeleteThank yo so much ...Lahari :)
DeleteLove it, Sushree. It's beautiful, innocent and cute. The joy of childhood rolled in a crisp manner.
ReplyDeleteCheck mine on http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/03/23/wow-last-cigarette-and-1-40-a-m-local
Thank you Vishal :) Glad you liked it . I read your post...it's awesome :)
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