As the sky
gets painted in blue
And travels
across the rainbow’s hues
Falls down
rain drops making up puddles
Splashing some
on my new doodle
The sun
shines bright on summer noon
Pushing back
our lovely shy moon
Blows cold
breeze in frosty days
Oh…Mom pulls
me out when in bed I laze
I still want
to float in my dreamland
On Mount Everest
where I stand
Being the
brave and fearless girl
Walking over
steep roads walking over hills
Fighting
every fear enjoying every thrill
But have to
get ready just can’t deny
Wobbling up
noodles wobbling egg fry
I saw her
eyes it was still wet
Crying all
night waking up late
Don’t know what
to say
To make her
smile
Washing away
her pain
Scaring it
till miles
Finishing my
stuff when I walk to bus stop
A small
little thought quietly pops up
I miss those
days together with dad
Jumping along
the house or dancing like mad
Hip hop hip
hop we both went about
But not
escaping mama’s angry shouts
Hiding under
the sofa we giggle up for fun
In drowsy
evenings or Sunday’s morn
Reading books
of Noddy
Reading books
of fairy tales
I used to
laugh like crazy
And never
ever wail
Eating extra
ice cream from both mom and dad’s share
Visiting carnivals
visiting city’s fairs
I wished the
clock never ticked by
Under their
shadow I never had to cry
What I didn’t
think was
Things will
break apart
Coz it was all so lovely
From the
beginning from the start
Why things
changed and for whom
I know I don’t
have the answers
I don’t have
a clue
They say I am
kid
They say I am
too small
To listen up
to grownups talks
And their
quarrels .
Well I know I
may not be big enough
But at least
I understand when to stop
When to say
sorry to my loved ones
How to
please my best friend in just one instance
As big one’s
they don’t even know that
Not to finish
up
Math’s sums too
fast
If calculations
go wrong in one single step
The whole
answer simply goes in waste
To not
scribble on art works book
It dirties
up the clean beautiful look
To not to
fight with your class mate
And to say
goodbye when you leave near the gate
If a small
kid like me knows all these
Can’t they make
up
Sharing
chocolate ice cream in our freeze
Life would
get sweet
And lovely
again
In sunny
afternoons
Or in heavy
rains
Throw up all
anger
And please do
come back
To our home
sweet home
Oh dear
loving Dad .
A poetry written for Write.... Edit... Publish Challenge ....
What comes to mind for the March WEP challenge - Through the eyes of a child? Rewriting a passage from a child's POV? A montage of images through the eyes of a child? A poignant or exhilarating poem? A non-fiction piece told from a child's POV? The possibilities are limitless!
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Hello Sushree and welcome to WEP! What a beautiful, yet poignant poem on life seen through the eyes of a child. I found it very clever and touching, moving to sadness towards the end. I hope this child's plea is answered. How many children wish for a simple, joyous family life, yet it is denied to so many.
ReplyDeleteThank you for participating in WEP this month.
Denise
Thanks you so much Denise ....for your kind words and appreciation .
DeleteI just loved the idea of writing something from the POV of a child :) How gentle are those thoughts of a kid which doesn't demand anything more than simple happiness of life .
The WEP Blog is really good ..read some awesome stuff there ...Thank you for coming out with something so creative :)
Looking forward for new prompts in forthcoming months.
Hope you grow leaps and bounds :)
Hello Sushree, and nice to meet you. Too many children feel insecure and baffled because of adult problems. I hope this child gets what she is asking for, which is all what children ask of us, a happy, loving and secure home, yet we seem unable as a species to answer that plea.
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Nilanjana
Hi Nilanjana :) Actually I should thank you as I got to know about WEP after reading your post .
DeleteRightly said about the issue of children and their insecurities . Hope every child's wishes get fulfilled .
Thanks for dropping by my blog .
Aww Nice one Sushree. This post and prompt actually gave me so many ideas! Is it an open prompt for all?
ReplyDeleteThank you MS :)
DeleteYa..it's open for all ....do visit the Write...Edit...Publish Blog .
I have added the link at the end of the post .
ooh thats cool, submitted one! really thanks, your post gave me ideas! :D
DeleteA beautiful and flawless one from the child's innocent thoughts:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Vishal for your beautiful words :)
DeleteSuch a lovely poem with the right Qns & thoughts, Sushree.
ReplyDeleteWhy can't people understand & patch up like kids?
Thank you Anita for the appreciation :)
DeleteMay be because they aren't that simple at heart .....
We can learn a lot from kids.. Lovely poem Shushree...
ReplyDeleteThank you Preethi for your lovely comment :)
DeleteLovely thoughts, and poignant! Well done, and I liked the simple way you had her sum it all up in her mind. Life is simple when you're young. . .but they do see more than we think they see.
ReplyDeleteEvery one has their own interpretations for life . But sometimes we get so engrossed in life , we simply forget about others feelings .
DeleteThank you so much for the appreciation :)
Oh so well done. So very clear where her love lies, who she misses and yet it's so gentle, almost melancholy. I felt her joy, felt her hesitation as she reaches to describe what is foreign and uncomfortable among the joyous memories and desires.
ReplyDeleteOh..thank you so much for understanding the emotions I tried to decipher in the poem . Glad you liked it :)
DeleteWOW Sushree... this is beautiful !
ReplyDeleteThank you for the appreciation :)
DeleteVery poignant. So insightful. How we underestimate our children. They are so wise. I loved the bit about her wanting to brave and fearless. As a child I so longed to be a heroine! Still haven't given up hope.
ReplyDeleteWe should never give up hope Jenny ...who knows it may come true in the most unexpected way .
DeleteGlad you liked it :)
very beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely entry - the child's wishes are just so simple and then the adults make life so very complicated. Welcome to WEP.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sally :) I would love to be a part of WEP .
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