# Day 4 Write Tribe Festival Of Words
“It’s not that easy you know”
“It should never be, when it is, it’s not the worth”
“But ….it has left me with a pungent feeling that still
clings on to my mind leaving me vulnerable at the most awkward moments turning me into an object that can only absorb but can not reflect. It may
have been suppressed but nobody can apprehend when it would pop up it’s ugly
head taking me into it’s grasp again, uncertainty that’s the most certain
character of any mental disorder” she said furrowing her brows displaying her
deep concerns about the step he was asking her to take.
“ I understand dear, I totally do, what I was just trying to say is how pestering circumstances may be always remember, there’s a new door
out there, waiting to get unlocked bringing in
a dash of fresh air” he said holding on to her palm making her feel
reassured.
Linking up the Post with Five Sentence Fiction - Fresh and Write Tribe for Day 4 of The Festival Of Words " Idea : Be Human"
Love the lines,how pestering circumstances may be always remember, there’s a new door out there, waiting to get unlocked bringing in a dash of fresh air” . Doc, it's such beautifully weaved and powerful portrayal.
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Thank you Vishal for your encouraging words :)
DeleteThe thought deals the message. Beautifully written Sush :) I could see the scene happening in front of me . Well done dear
ReplyDeleteThanks Rashmi for understanding the thoughts behind the words :)
DeleteI loved your thoughts on this take..
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Really....thank you :)
DeleteUncertainty definitely takes away our joy of the moment. Well done.
ReplyDeleteIt does....thank you :)
DeleteA dash of fresh air..I like it! Very well penned.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the fresh words too ;)
DeleteWonderfully sketched...you've put a soul into your characters with so few words...Can certainly empathise with what the woman is going through! Loved the post :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you for your wonderful words that brought smile on my face :)
Delete"There is a new door out there with fresh air" I simply loved it
ReplyDeleteVery refreshing!!
Nice uplifting post. Beautiful thought :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the beautiful words :)
DeleteIts in those times of uncertainty that such assuring words help :)
ReplyDeleteAssuring words always help...it just needs to come from the right corners :)
DeleteCertainty always exists in every uncertainty... we just need to courage and will to find it
ReplyDeleteI loved this one very much Sushree... keep writing such posts ☺
Thank you so much Meenu for your beautiful words of appreciation. Honestly it means a lot :)
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