They say it’s my longing.
For you and for being yours.
They think, I dash my body across yours for feeling the
sensation, that tickles my watery texture against your graveled one, unraveling
pleasure of a life time.
People, I don’t know what to say on their behalf as they see
what they want to and speak what they don’t.
Never would they understand that it’s not my longing for the
shore but my secret desire for the sky that propels me to use force as a medium
of escape.
Pic : FSF
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interesting narrative - I like how this unfolds - in a reflective tone, then ends with a forceful twist. Well done :)
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DeleteBeautiful penned doc, breezy filled with hope and positive energy:)
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ReplyDeletethank you Soumya :)
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O man..!! How do you do it, every single time ?!
ReplyDeleteOnce again, a terrific post by you..
Cheers
Really !! Thanks a lot Geets :)
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