One after the
other they kept coming but replies never came
Eagerness gave
way to reluctance and shyness to denial
The remorse
face of her mother reminded her of the pathetic condition she was in
His eyes
never saw a letter of approval by the recruiters
They weren’t
late in branding him as the ugly scar on his family’s face
But his
undying spirit never let him down and he finally settled well
Fate pulled
them in , to alleviate the emptiness surrounding them
“It’s quite
late now” they grumbled
Few signatures
inside the court’s premises and happiness quietly sneaked in
Linking up this post with Write Tribe's 100 Words on Saturday #12 and Ultimate Blog Challenge
Today being a holiday for A-Z ...Enjoy your Sunday Friends ;)
liked your take on the prompt... but I thought that 'quite quietly' was one single word....
ReplyDeleteYa...it may be but being busy with work and out of Bhubaneswar this is what came to my mind :) And thanks :)
DeleteAll's well, that ends well :) And happy Sunday Sushree :) Good to see you back :)
ReplyDeleteanother blissful ending :) two lost souls dind each other!
ReplyDeleteSimple and sweet. :)
ReplyDeleteA happy ending is always nice.Have a great weekend
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Story..!!
ReplyDeleteBranding superficially for some other mistakes - a routine for negative actions...Good story. You also made him successful at the end. That's looking at the positive side. Thanks.
ReplyDeletelovely story with blissful ending!! :)
ReplyDeleteAn interesting story. Good it ended on a positive note.
ReplyDeleteAll's well that ends well :-)
ReplyDeleteAh, the silver lining at the end makes it all better :) Nice, Sushree!
ReplyDelete~Shailaja's post
Well as long as it all ends well..nicely done!
ReplyDeleteR for Ready-Random Thoughts Naba
First visit here.
ReplyDeletevery intersting posr