Sunday, 25 May 2014

Magical Fog....



He stood there ,surprised.


Three months and out of the hospital bed even the gentle breeze felt like a blessing.
 

Flashes of past days crossed his mind reminding him of his daily routine when every day he used to curse the morning fog that settled down on the car’s panes giving him another reason to curse life and it’s maker.

Today ,standing on the wet grass ,feeling it’s  freshness between his bare fingers and touching those tiny drops sparkling on the maple leaves he could hear someone silently speak .

“It’s the magic of nature that anchors these moments……called Life”



                                     
 Pic : Friday Fictioneers

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.


This post is liked up with Friday Fictioneers Photo prompt , WOW "Magic" Five sentence fiction "Anchor"
                               

29 comments:

  1. Welcome back. Believe it or not I was about to email you last night! But then got caught up in studies. How you been? :)

    Ps lovely take on all the prompts!

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  2. Actually have been quite busy with work and a new project . Couldn't find time for the blog . But was missing it like hell .
    This thing started in the middle of A-Z Challenge ...and don't ask how I managed posting for the challenge .
    But still could complete that ...thanks for your support all the way :)

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    1. Aah yes towards the end it was just posting I remember :) and aah loved reading your posts. Good luck with the project :D

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  3. welcome back sushree :) i have been wondering from so many days why u hav stopped blogging and if evrythn was alright at ur end! glad to see u posting again :)

    and the post is lovely :)

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    1. After A-Z Challenge and UBC I wanted to take a break for sometime . More ever I am out of my home town from the mid of April for work purpose ....so couldn't find more time . But thanks to all you guys...for showering your love on me and my blog that coerced me to get active again :)

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  4. Beautifully written Doc. I can feel the whole emotions to one's delight. Bautiful:)

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    1. Oh...thank you Vishal ...for your kind words of appreciation :)

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  5. Beautiful! A wonderful take on both the prompts!

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    1. Thank you Reema :) After a long time...how are you and hw r things goin ...

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    2. I am good.. and things are okay.. missed you on WB.. luckily managed to find you here. Even I am thinking of dropping out of WB.

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  6. Wow :) What a wonderful take on the prompts :)

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    1. Thank you so much ....and welcome to my blog :)

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  7. Hello and welcome ! Your story is beautifully done!
    Patricia ( high fives and raspberries )

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    1. Thanks a lot ....welcome to my blog :)

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  8. So beautiful and a gorgeous take on the prompt for 5SF. x

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  9. I like this. Great take on the prompt!

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  10. when i read different posts some of them help me to broaden my thinking horizon......yours is one

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    1. Is it :) Thanks a lot for your kind words of appreciation :)

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  11. A lovely post..and for 2 prompts :) well combined...enjoyed reading :)

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  12. Thank you so much ...glad you liked :) And it's 3 Prompts;)

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  13. True, life is fragile and we take it for granted. Coming out of a three month stint in a hospital is reason enough count your blessings.

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  14. Neat! Really nice. Good work this week!

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  15. Dear Sushree,

    The concept of writing one story for five prompts is a bit daunting to me. Often it doesn't work, in my opinion. This worked fairly well.

    shalom,

    Rochelle

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  16. Sushree, Good story. There's just one thing that doesn't seem to me to fit well. He was standing on the wet grass feeling it between his bare "fingers" would sound better if it was his bare "toes" being he's standing. Other than that, well done. : ) ---Susan

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  17. Sushree.. Lovely take. :):) - Magic of Nature !!

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Do scribble down few words ...it motivates :)