Sunday, 10 May 2015

The Tap...



# 1 

Irritated. That’s exactly what he felt. 
On every body. On every thing.
The property and it’s division. Oh! It has been such a painful task. All his brothers, wanted the best.
The family orchard. How can they just rip it apart.

Water. It leaked. Constantly. From the tap. Near the courtyard.
How he wished if somebody could fix both.


#2 

Tiring. Was the whole day for him.
So were most of his days.
The blazing sun just makes it more difficult. 

Water if somebody would offer. But  who will, to a daily laborer.
Thank God! The tap. It leaked. 




                                                


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11 comments:

  1. It touched the heart and strong narrative that makes the emotion of a thirsty man come alive.

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    1. Thanks a lot Vishal for your beautiful words :)

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  2. I really like this, Sushree. Well done!

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  3. Hats off to you .... same scenario in two different perspectives ... just WOW :-)

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    1. This comment just made my day. Hats off that to from one of my favorite bloggers :) Thanks a lot :):)

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  4. I liked the dual perception of the same event in our different states of mind. Very well described and justified about each of the emotions!

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  5. I liked the dual perception of the same event in our different states of mind. Very well described and justified about each of the emotions!

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  6. I liked the dual perception of the same event in our different states of mind. Very well described and justified about each of the emotions!

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