Thursday, 25 June 2015

Waves

They say it’s my longing.  
For you and for being yours.

They think, I dash my body across yours for feeling the sensation, that tickles my watery texture against your graveled one, unraveling pleasure of a life time.  
People, I don’t know what to say on their behalf as they see what they want to and speak what they don’t.



Never would they understand that it’s not my longing for the shore but my secret desire for the sky that propels me to use force as a medium of escape.




                                   


Pic : FSF

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16 comments:

  1. interesting narrative - I like how this unfolds - in a reflective tone, then ends with a forceful twist. Well done :)

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  2. Nicely done, I had never thought about waves this way :O

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    1. Even I hadn't till I wrote it :) Thank you

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  3. Beautiful penned doc, breezy filled with hope and positive energy:)

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  4. What an interesting take on the prompt! Love it! :)

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  5. Very different take. Loved it!

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  6. Awesome expression of inner feelings

    http://womanzie.blogspot.in/2015/06/waves.html

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  7. O man..!! How do you do it, every single time ?!
    Once again, a terrific post by you..

    Cheers

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Do scribble down few words ...it motivates :)