Tuesday, 2 June 2015

Easy...



“It’s not that easy you know”
“It should never be, when it is, it’s not the worth”

“But ….it has left me with a pungent feeling that still clings on to my mind leaving me vulnerable at the most awkward moments turning me into an object that can only absorb but can not reflect. It may have been suppressed but nobody can apprehend when it would pop up it’s ugly head taking me into it’s grasp again, uncertainty that’s the most certain character of any mental disorder” she said furrowing her brows displaying her deep concerns about the step he was asking her to take.


“ I understand dear, I totally do, what I was just trying to say  is how pestering circumstances may be always remember, there’s a new door out there, waiting to get unlocked bringing in  a dash of fresh air” he said holding on to her palm making her feel reassured.      




                                     
          


Linking up the Post with Five Sentence Fiction - Fresh and Write Tribe for Day 4 of The Festival Of Words " Idea : Be Human"



                                               
                                              



20 comments:

  1. Love the lines,how pestering circumstances may be always remember, there’s a new door out there, waiting to get unlocked bringing in a dash of fresh air” . Doc, it's such beautifully weaved and powerful portrayal.
    Cheerz

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    1. Thank you Vishal for your encouraging words :)

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  2. The thought deals the message. Beautifully written Sush :) I could see the scene happening in front of me . Well done dear

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    1. Thanks Rashmi for understanding the thoughts behind the words :)

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  3. I loved your thoughts on this take..

    Cheers

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  4. Uncertainty definitely takes away our joy of the moment. Well done.

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  5. A dash of fresh air..I like it! Very well penned.

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    1. Thank you for the fresh words too ;)

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  6. Wonderfully sketched...you've put a soul into your characters with so few words...Can certainly empathise with what the woman is going through! Loved the post :-)

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    1. Thank you for your wonderful words that brought smile on my face :)

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  7. "There is a new door out there with fresh air" I simply loved it
    Very refreshing!!

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  8. Nice uplifting post. Beautiful thought :)

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  9. Its in those times of uncertainty that such assuring words help :)

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    1. Assuring words always help...it just needs to come from the right corners :)

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  10. Certainty always exists in every uncertainty... we just need to courage and will to find it

    I loved this one very much Sushree... keep writing such posts ☺

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    1. Thank you so much Meenu for your beautiful words of appreciation. Honestly it means a lot :)

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Do scribble down few words ...it motivates :)

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