Sunday, 8 June 2014

The Wait....



Beautiful it was
Every day
As she swayed her curvy body away
A gentle breeze seemed to cross
For love struck couples
Wanting to be lost
In valley of emotion
In feeling’s stream
Speaking of love
Not caprice or whim

Alas! I forgot the world around
That crushed my tender love to the ground
Ignoring requests
Snubbing my pleas
Reminding
I am a mere tree
Born to serve
With my log
With my wood
Giving warmth preparing food

Whatever I am
I don’t want to know
Coz I will be waiting for her
In flowery springs
Or in winter snow 


Pic Credit :  http://vidyasury.com

This post is linked to 
100 Words on Saturday 2014 - # 17

23 comments:

  1. Elegant is the word that came to my mind after reading this.... a poem in the words of a tree...good one Sushree

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  2. A wordsmith tree :) Nice one, Sushree!

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    1. Actually you did something nice here :)

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  3. Thoughts of a tree! You have brought a lovely twist here Sushree!

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  4. Wonderful is all I can say on behalf of the tree :-). Very nicely done.

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  5. Aesthetically chosen words touching the heart and nice woven to give definition and shape to the tree. Mesmerizing words. Doc:)

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    1. Thank you for your beautiful words :)

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  6. It takes a sensitive soul to hear the cry of a tree and whispers of the air. Beautifully done, Sushree!

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    1. I wish every human remembers that they too have a sensitive soul inside . The only thing they need is ....to hear it's voice ....

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  7. The log of wood is dead but your poem is full of life and is flowing.

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  8. A lovely poem.These lines were touching
    I am a mere tree
    Born to serve
    With my log
    With my wood
    Giving warmth preparing food

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  9. Lovely poetry :)
    Words of a tree :)

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  10. You have chosen just the right words Sushree. Lovely again :)

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  11. Beautiful. Simple words but such a deep poem. :)

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  12. Kudos to you for choosing to speak out for the tree . I wish we could hear the tree's plea , always !

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  13. Speaking on behalf of the tree!! A great poem wonderfully carved.

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  14. Delightful power expressing heart felt of emotion. You gave life and beauty to the tree.

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  15. A Liebster awaits you on my blog :-D http://reemadsouza.blogspot.in/2014/06/and-here-is-second-liebster.html

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Do scribble down few words ...it motivates :)