Tuesday, 25 March 2014

Granny....

                                                    


Cuddled  in your arms
Under  moonlit night
Feeling the warmth beneath
Holding onto you tight
I crept into your bed
For countless stories in store
Of fairies princes and ghosts
Tempting me for more
Honesty prevails alone
And goodness over sins
What really did inspire
Was Arjuna’s wins
I never wanted to come back
To boring afternoons
Where every day after school
 Lonely I marooned
Craving for your love
Starving for your care
Remembering tales of courage
And tales of dare
I miss you all along
In spring or winter fall
My dear sweet granny
The greatest love of all


                                            

This post is for Write Tribe's 100 Words On Saturday 2014 # 8 Prompt " The greatest love of all " and Indispire Prompt " A story told by granny that inspired us "



22 comments:

  1. Aww, love the way you've combined both the prompts. Was actually looking forward to some poetry for the grandma tales prompt :)

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  2. Sushree, Hatssss off !!! I love my granny , and I can so so relate to the theme here, but my admiration is more for the perfection in the rhythm and rhyme that you've created so so well. Lovely :) Do write more :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Sreeja for your lovely comment :)
      I am glad that my poem could touch your heart ....
      Will try continue writing as long my ink flows and my thoughts dwell....

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  3. Wonderful Sushree.I remember my Granny...

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  4. Very much heart touching Di..:) and such a cute pic you have put..:)

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    1. Thank you so much Lahari ....even I love that pic :)

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  5. I miss my granny after reading this..thanks for sharing!

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    1. Thank you...even I miss my Granny a lot ...

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  6. awww how sweet. Unfortunately I haven't spent that much time with grandma... makes me feel how much I have missed.

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    1. The love of grandparents is really unique and innocent :)

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  7. I could feel the love of granny in this post :) You are becoming an expert in combining prompts sushree!!! Very well written :) Love your blog ;)

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    1. Glad that my poetry could make you feel that :)
      Thanks a ton for the lovely comment n ya thank you so much for reading my posts n appreciating them ....it really means a lot :)

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  8. Beautiful poem, Doc and love the beautiful words coming straight from the heart. Love is pure bliss and white as purity. You said it:)

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    1. Thank you so much ...glad you aptly understood the hidden emotions and love :)

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  9. Great way to combine two prompts...reminds me of my grandpa...he was the one who would tell me stories. :)

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    1. Thanks a ton :)
      May be our grandpa's are grandma's brought out the story teller in us :)

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  10. Beautiful...They are the best people on EARTH

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  11. Thank you n ya indeed they are :)

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  12. Ahh.. lovely.. takes me to my past..

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