Saturday, 29 March 2014

Healed...




                                                      



Few years ago  she had stepped out of her home with the promise of returning back only when she cleared this exam

Coz she knew  it was the sole way she would survive  pangs of her past that seem to stab her afresh everyday 

Today , her name featured in the list  repaying her back for every little pleasure she was starved off in the course of preparation and transformed her into an administrative officer instantly 

Someone in the crowd asked “  How does it feel “

She couldn’t reply a single word but deep within she felt her heart begin to heal 

                                                         

                                       
  Write Tribe's 100 Words on Saturday 2014 # 9 

32 comments:

  1. that's one determined girl :) beautiful story

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  2. Love her grit and determination. She truly proved that, 'I am more than my scars'!! :)

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    1. Thank you Shilpa ...life indeed is more than our pain n scars :)

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  3. Triumph of human spirit and very inspiring, indeed:)

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    1. Thank you Vishal n ya human spirit does triumph over every challenge :)

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  4. A girl with great determination!! Loved the story,doctor.

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  5. Getting what we wish for is only possible through hard work and determination....nice take on the prompt!

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    1. Rightly said Nabanita ....Thank you :)

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  6. A heartfelt story on grit and glory. Well woven :)

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  7. A beautiful story indeed. I like most how the story ends here... someone from crowd asks "how does it feel..!" it gives a symbolic touch..as if God himself was witnessing the girl's industriousness and himself appeared before her from within a crowd.. The crowd I find also very much symbolic here.. beautiful write.. Thank you so much..

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    1. Oh Thank you so much for such a beautiful interpretation :)
      I instilled the crowd in the story as every time we get touched by success it appears again but alone we have to walk on the path towards it . And ya God always keeps an eye on his beloved children ...

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  8. Ohh I love the girl's character! Very strong and determined to make her dreams her destiny. Love it :)

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    1. Thank you so much doc :) Glad you liked it n welcome to my blog:)

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  9. Awesome :) Her hardwork has healed her ! Admire your imagery :)

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    1. Thank you Sreeja :) it does heal us sometimes...

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    1. Thanks Arpit....glad you loved it :) And welcome to my blog :)

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  11. i like reading such pieces, where the character is identified through moments and emotions...

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Do scribble down few words ...it motivates :)

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