Sunday, 23 March 2014

Paired Forever...

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.


It was the day of her daughter’s annual function and she had been repeatedly warned to not miss it amid any circumstance .
The name of the best artist of the year was announced .

A satiated smile adorned her lips not only displaying the happiness of a proud parent but also that of an passionate artist torn apart from her canvass giving in to the restrains of an Indian woman’s life .

“Mama”.... her daughter’s voice flowed in , there she stood beaming with radiance on her gentle face .

In utter silence she promised herself to let those tiny hands cling on to the paintbrush and colors as if  paired forever unlike her own which lay in ruins abandoned in some corner of her old home .

This post is a Five Sentence Fiction with the Theme " Ruins" For BlogAdda's WOW with prompt "Paired Forever"


  1. Nice story linking two prompts aptly, Sushree. Has the right element- happy ending with child's success!

  2. :D her daughter lives her dream :)

  3. very clever combination of 2 prompts :) Aptly describes mother's love for her daughter :) great work :)

  4. Beautifully written; I loved this.

  5. nice story and well described :) keep writing :)

  6. Enjoyed this very much. I noticed a lot of responses this week on the FSF prompt!

  7. Glad that you enjoyed it :)
    Writing FSF is real fun dabbed with creativity :):)
    This was my first time and I just loved writing it :)

  8. Di You are so creative..:) Loved it..:)

  9. Love it, Sushree. It's beautiful, innocent and cute. The joy of childhood rolled in a crisp manner.
    Check mine on

  10. Thank you Vishal :) Glad you liked it . I read your's awesome :)


Do scribble down few words motivates :)

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