Wednesday, 2 April 2014

Beginning....



                                                


With gentle steps she came inside the room sliding the door screen a bit , placing the tea cups on the table she greeted them with folded hands displaying the hint of family values they were searching for in their would be daughter in law .

Preparations for the marriage started with fanfare taking care of every minute detail to please the groom’s side to keep them appeased .

But the lucky girl transformed into a living nightmare when the surgeons declared that her left palm had to be amputated owing to the accident she suffered while returning from the market that day on an expedition for buying hand crafted designer jewelry .

Stripped off the eligibility to dress up as a radiant newlywed she was left out to languish, thankfully with the support of her near and dear ones .

And that’s when she met him , the man who spoke plenty of emotions without a single utterance giving her life a new beginning .

                                                 



  

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28 comments:

  1. Wow..:) nice Di..:) Waiting to see 'C'..:)

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  2. Thank you ...Lahari :) Hope you like the C one too...

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  3. she is indeed lucky to have found some one like dat! good one doctor :)

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    1. There still exist good people among us who make others lucky enough :) Thanks .....

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  4. An emotional story building up sweetly.

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  5. Oh she is so lucky! Gud work girl :)

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  6. Beautiful...got me goosebumps....

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  7. That looks promising:-) Wonderful told story- waiting to see what happens next:-)

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  8. Nice post! Gentle and brief it holds a lot of meaning.
    Mary at Variety, the Spice of Life

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    1. Thank you :) Glad you deciphered the hidden meaning ....

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  9. How nice that she got her happy ending after all. Nice one, Sushree :)

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    1. Thank you :) Glad you liked it....

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  10. A hearty ending, happy happy....happy for her :)

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    1. Thanks Sreeja.....I love happy endings and if it's not happy .....it's not the ending :):)

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  11. Such a nice man is hard to come by..I wish he were the same one for whom they were considering her and who overcame all demur.
    You are able to churn out very short stories excellently

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    1. Indeed it is hard to find such a man ....and he was not the same one but a different person who was destined to meet her :)
      Thanks a ton for your kind words of appreciation :):)

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